sentury
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Sentury
Jan 23, 2012 16:35:53 GMT -5
Post by sentury on Jan 23, 2012 16:35:53 GMT -5
OOC Information OOC Name:Ariel Link to Previous Character:None yet
General Name: Sentury Alias: Sen Species: Kukkien Gender: Male Age: 1 Pack: Loner Rank: n/a
Physical Height: 26" Weight: 45lbs Appearance: Sentury is fairly lean, and a dusky grey color. The fur on his legs, tail, and neck ruffle has an auburn tint in the right kind of lighting. Several types of mosses, along with blue and white forget-me-nots, and some mushrooms grow from his neck ruffle. The fur on his neck is a lighter neutral yellow color, and forms a stripe down his spine, that fades into darker fur about 3 inches down his tail. His nose, claws, and lips are black. He is rather soft spoken, unless he's angry, in which he gets very loud and gruff. Most of the time Sentury is lazy walking through the forest, and paws loudly. When he is on the hunt, however, he is virtually silent. Sentury has bi-colored eyes, one a deep green and the other an icy light green.
Mental Strengths:- Quick thinking
- Good at problem solving
- Keeps a clear head, for the most part
- Talented at Tracking
- Loves swimming
- Creative
- Generally keeps a calm attitude
Weaknesses:- Anxiety
- Periods of being anti-social
- Trouble working with large groups
- Acts on impulses
- Tends to move at a slow pace
- Prefers a more solitary existence
Personality: Sentury is somewhat of a loner, and prefers spending his time trotting around his pack's territory rather than at large gatherings. He doesn't necessarily abhor social interaction, but he doesn't actively seek it out either. While most of the time he is calm and easygoing, when someone rubs him the wrong way or outright hurts him, emotionally or physically, he tends to recede within himself and will refuse any attempt at conversation.
The times that he acts on impulses are usually if he is very hungry, dehydrated, or tense, he will make fast decisions without thinking them through. For example, jumping on a prey too early. This is rare, and usually only happens when food and water are in short supply. There are no physical consequences of his anxiety, but sometimes if Sen is alone too long he will start over-thinking small issues.
He also enjoys being alone because he can feed his creative side. Sentury loves to collect interesting or pretty rocks and objects, and even has a secret hiding place for all of his findings. When meeting new wolves, he is extremely shy, but if they are open to him he warms up very quickly. He tends to prefer the company of females to males, as they tend to be less physical and abrasive.
Once close to someone, Sentury is very open and friendly, and doesn't hesitate to confide in them. Despite his natural inclination to avoid deep conversation, he tries to overcome it knowing time is always of the essence. History: Sentury has not lived a charmed life up to this point, which accounts for his talent in problem solving. His birth was unplanned, and as a result, his mother provided only the bare basics necessary for him to live. As soon as he was able to catch mice, his mother somewhat abandoned him, always around but never providing anything close to maternal.
His father was a high ranking pack member, and his mother of very low rank, and they were not approved to breed, making Sen illegitimate. Sentury is nothing like his father, who was rowdy, stubborn, and aggressive. His father also sired 3 other puppies to a different female. One of these puppies, the youngest female named Adria, was close with Sentury for their first 7-8 months of life, but when she achieved a higher rank in the pack she left him behind. Sentury does share several traits with his mother, mostly the spells of anxiety or being anti-social. They also have similar physical features.
He has come close to starving several times, but discovered he could live off berries and certain roots to keep himself alive. Because of the nature of his birth, his first several months of life were always on edge with the rest of the pack, and they did not provide any special attention for him.
Now that he has survived the first year of his life, Sen has begun to feel there is more to life than foraging through the woods for pretty things. He wants to explore and breach the confines of his pack, so decides to set out on his own to find a new community to join. Other: None
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Sentury
Jan 24, 2012 7:15:18 GMT -5
Post by Somatra on Jan 24, 2012 7:15:18 GMT -5
Hello and Welcome to Wonderwhy! My name is Somatra and I shall be at your service for the remainder of the bio review process, pleasure to meet your acquaintance what what. Now on to reviewing so we can get you out there and having fun, exploring new creative ideas, developing wondrous relations with other characters and so forth. Your appearance looks good so far, though I cannot seem to determine what a "naple" is apart from a city in Southern Italy. In addition, please elaborate some more on his appearance, perhaps discuss his voice some more? Excellent Strengths and Weaknesses, just need them to be formatted in a list fashion for easier reading and organization, just use the following code to help you out and insert extra bullets as needed: [ul] [li] [/li][li] [/li][li] [/li][li] [/li][/ul] Personality is well written, however I would like to see you expand on his weaknesses in it, perhaps discuss how acting on his impulses affects him, or what his deep anxiety has as consequences. Other then that I would like an elaboration, or expansion of his history, perhaps discuss his father? Does he have any siblings, what about friends? How did his parents meet, why didn't his mother give him motherly attention? Just little things that help to construct a char and give it a 3 dimensional feel. Ok, so once you have made the changes just reply to this thread to let me know and I will gladly look over the bio again. Good luck, Somatra
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sentury
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Posts: 13
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Sentury
Jan 24, 2012 10:47:55 GMT -5
Post by sentury on Jan 24, 2012 10:47:55 GMT -5
Thanks so much! I made the changes you suggested and tried to expand a little. Just let me know if there's anything else that needs work :3
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Sentury
Jan 24, 2012 11:44:04 GMT -5
Post by Somatra on Jan 24, 2012 11:44:04 GMT -5
Aright, just change the gender of your profile to male to match your char and then I will set you up for rp-ing in the boards.
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sentury
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Sentury
Jan 24, 2012 12:11:48 GMT -5
Post by sentury on Jan 24, 2012 12:11:48 GMT -5
K, changed it ^-^
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