Cresent - Lyxxi - Finished! (Again)

[Cresent]

General
OOC Name: Cresent
Name: Cresent
Alias: Shine, Cres
Species: Lyxxi
Gender: Female
Age: 4
Pack: Children of Hvítur Ári
Rank: Sitter
Birthday: October

Physical
Height: 19 inches
Weight: 26 pounds
Appearance: Cresent has beautiful sky-blue eyes with small traces of white, and has an almost striped pelt with golden brown and orange. She is skinnier than others of her species because of a little lack of eating at a pup, and also has a semi-large claw mark on the top of her left ear, and it usually bleeds, so the fur around that area is sometimes caked in dried blood. There is a midnight ash colored cresent shape on her stomach, that due to lighting, sometimes appears pure black or a light grey. Her four tails are also striped, and when she walks, the tails gently wag, usually showing off having more tails than other wolves.
Other: n/a

Mental
Strengths:
-She has the agility and speed of her species.
-Due to the four tails, she has more balance than other wolves.
-She can roll in dirt to cover her pelt and hide quickly when in the face of danger.
-Cresent has a very good sense of smell, and can track a scent for miles.
-Cresent is a fast learner and can adapt to situations quickly.
Weaknesses:
-Her bright pelt color can sometimes attract attention when she isn't hiding.
-She has under-developed eye sight and has blurry vision sometimes.
-Cresent's crazy nature sometimes gets in the way of an objective or goal.
-She is extremly paranoid due to her past...

Personality: Cresent is a demented wolf, with her situation as a pup scarring her mind, and making her think, after her ordeal, that she's 'indestructable'. She can be very hyper around others, its like her energy almost never runs out. She usually feels like she can do anything, even when she can't, and thus dosn't have very good judgement. She can be brave at times, when knowing the situation that she's in, will try to think of ways to get out of it when she's 'sane'. She will also try to fight a group when she can't think of any way out. Her personality towards pups is very tender and loving, since she dosn't want any other pup to go through what she went through, ever.

History: Cresent's parents lived in seperation from a pack, and survived by living on their own and doing a lot of work, but it paid off. Cresent's mother, Lunar, gave birth to five wolves soon and they had to hunt even more than before, and almost went insane through the large amount of work put in to taking care of themselves and five other pups. Soon all of the pups died off from hunger and dehydration but one, Cresent. She grew up and at age three, a nearby pack attacked her family due to them 'taking all the land'. Lunar pleaded for the pack to leave them in peace, but they took her life. Cresent was soon being hunted down like prey. She went into a forest and hid from the pack for what seemed to be eternity, but just a few days, her agility and hiding ability keeping her alive for that time. Soon the wolf attackers arrived and attacked Cresent, and wounded her to the point she could barly move. The pack left her for dead. She dragged herself to WonderWhy, and soon her wounds healed, but she is still looking for the pack that killed her mother, and seeks revenge on any wolf that kills others of their kind.

Other: Tried for a different History this time, hope you like it

[Cresent]

Picture:

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[Cy]

Before you get started you must know. There are no humans in this universe, even outside of WonderWhy. So you should modify your story so there are no humans. Basically redo her history.

Also, lyxxus have one tail for each year of life. She is four, so she should have four tails.

Her personality contradicts itself a bit too much, saying she is anti-social, shy, yet argumentative. Please make up your mind what you would like her personality to be like. I'd like to see more of a description in her appearance, you mention briefly how she walks, but how does she talk, hold her head, things like that.

"Voice being soft and nice" does not really count as a strength. That bit should go up in appearance.

If you have any questions feel free to ask. i can't wait till she is done.

[Cresent]

~Sigh~ Look's like I got me some work to do, thanks for the comments.

[Skyler]

Accepted, you have one month to join a pack or buy loner status. ^^