Alyss : Cael

[Alyss]

General
OOC Name: Cresent
Name: Alyss
Alias: Lyss (You were expecting 'Aly' wern't you?)
Species: Cael
Gender: Female
Age: 3 years, 9 months
Pack: Loner
Rank: n/a

Physical
Height: 32 inches
Weight: 70 lbs on land, 85 lbs in water.
Appearance: Alyss has a golden pelt that, with her time in the water, gives the illusion that its sparkling. Her eyes are also a golden metalic tone, with small bits of silver scattered around. Her hind legs on land look a bit like her tail, as her pelt goes from her head to her hind legs, her golden pelt fades into a blue-green color. Her tail looks like the one in the species guide, but the colors are mostly faded into a aquamarine color with streaks of green that cover the tail's base color almost entirely. Her tail is long but not as large as it is in length.
Other: n/a

Mental
Strengths:
-Alyss can swim very well due to her species
-She has great endurance in the water, and can swim for long periods of time.
-She can move faster, and can make a kill easier in water.
-She has a great memory and can travel downstream and get back up the exact way from it.

Weaknesses:
-After being in the water for a while, it takes Alyss longer to get her land legs.
-She gets tired easily when running around on land.
-When traveling on land she can get lost more often than in water.
-Alyss will only hunt in the water (Her diet consists of flying fish) and only in a fatal situation, will kill prey on land.
Personality: Alyss is a cheerful wolf, she had a very good upbringing and had nothig to really complain about. She's on the optimistic side about most things, even when all is lost. She can be an anti-sociopath at times and will always try to make friends, yet can come on too strong. Her personality towards animals other than wolves is odd, her description of small prey is 'Little pups that you can eat and not be considered a cannibal.' Before she makes a kill, she would kiss the small prey before eating it. She had always liked other animals and thought of their lives equal to wolves, they just had to be killed for food. To larger animals, like dragons and griffins, its 'SWIM FOR YOUR LIFE.' If Alyss got into a situation like that, being attacked by a predator, she would quickly get out of the area. She can be brave at times sure, but not alone. She will avoid large predators unless she's with more than one wolf, then if its attacking she may stand a chance. Due to her 'water addiction' she can be very stubborn if another wolf wants her to get out of the water. Her singing voice is very nice of course, and dosn't expect praise for it, its just appreciated. Sometimes when she wants to impress someone she will sing to them.
History: Alyss was born into a family of pure Cael's, being one of two of the surviving pups, one had gotten lost and was assumed dead. She was living in an ocean that was just outside of WW, that pools into the northern lakes and rivers. Alyss would always play with her other sibling, Sisily. The two siblings would play marco polo in the ocean and tag on the beaches of the few islands that were in the ocean, and would eat the flying fish that migrated from there to WW during seasonal changes. One day Alyss and Sisily were playing around more and strayed away from their parents. They were pulled into a current that would lead to the Yvit cove, yet Sisily could escape, Alyss couldn't. Since she was younger, her tail couldn't push her enough to get out of the current, and was swept away. She searched and searched for a way to get back to her family, but failed. She now resides in the cove.
Other: n/a

[Artemis]

Her personality towards animals other than wolves is odd, her description of small prey is 'Little pups that you can eat and not be considered a cannibal.' Before she makes a kill, she would kiss the small prey before eating it. To larger animals, like dragons and griffins, its 'SWIM FOR YOUR LIFE.' She will avoid large predators unless she's with more than one wolf, then if its attacking she may stand a chance.

Can you explain that a bit more? I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to get at.

[Alyss]

Fixed, I hope that elaborates.

[Cy]

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[NOCHT !]

To larger animals, like dragons and griffins, its 'SWIM FOR YOUR LIFE.' If Alyss got into a situation like that, being attacked by a predator, she would quickly get out of the area, she can be brave at times sure, but not alone.
Sentence still reads awkwardly. Try:

To larger animals, like dragons and griffins, its 'SWIM FOR YOUR LIFE.' If Alyss got into a situation like that, being attacked by a predator, she would quickly get out of the area. She can be brave at times but she is smart enough to not take on such a big predator alone.

[Alyss]

Le fixed.

[Moonrose]

Accepted.