Amyea
Loner
[M:50][A:11]
Live To Be Free. Wolvles Forever
Posts: 3
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Amyea
Jul 11, 2012 15:06:49 GMT -5
Post by Amyea on Jul 11, 2012 15:06:49 GMT -5
OOC Information
OOC Name: Katreana Link to Previous Character: None
General
Name: Amyea Alias: Amy Species: Kukkien Gender: Female Age: 2 years Pack: Loner Rank: n/a
Physical
Height: twenty-five inches Weight: fifty-Ibs Appearance: She has a dark/mid grey on her back and along her main, but on the tips of her mane is a light is a shade of Grey. Along her neck, chest and underbelly there is a lighter shade of Grey, that grows darker towards her sides, back and neck. Around and under her eyes she has a darker Grey, similar to a lighter brown. On her tail which is long, it has a dark Grey like on her back and fades into the lighter Grey on the tip, like on her neck and chest. Her legs are a lighter/mid Grey and her paws are a light Grey. Her eyes are a pale yellow/orange color accustom to her species and also to most wolves. Her howl is not deep, nor high and settles itself in the mid range, thus having a common howl. Her voice is very youthful and calm. She moves silently, and steps lightly. her tail swishes slightly wider than normal for her species when she runs, but it is very quiet. She appears fairly taller than she stands due to her elongated mane. Other: None
Mental
Strengths:
- Calm
- Confidence
- intelligence
- persuasive
- caring
- loyalty
- Speed
Weaknesses:
- Fighting
- Naive
- Reserved
- Swimming
- Singing
- Tracking
- Fire/fires
- Courage
Personality: Amyea is a kind wolf, whom try's to be giving and loving to everyone she meets. If she gets into a tough situation she is able to get out, and if need be she will defend herself and others. She likes to go to lakes and body's of water, but can't swim. she loves rain and often will keep moving rather than hide when it pours. She likes to adventure and is described as adventuress, as she will often wander like as a pup. She is a tad bit shy and normally wont speak to strangers unless they speak to her first. She tends not to speak to other species but has a major dream to one day become a member of a pack, of which will appreciate her in whole. But she fears that no one shall accept her for other wolfs have trouble trusting her because of her overly-kindness. She hates when people make fun of her for her overgrown appearance, as she has several plants growing in her mane. She fears fire, due to a bad experiences with it, and would never go near fire.
History: Amyea was born into a small back with three siblings, two male one female. She was taught to love and be kind by her mother. She has had close to death experiences, she almost drowned when she was a pup, on the day it happened. She wandered farther than allowed from her den than allowed, and stumbled upon a river. She made her way into the water, the deepest point that she stood in now was few inches. She walked farther into the water, the current now grew stronger, she then took another step and was plunged head deep into the water, which now stood over a foot tall. She struggled to make her way back onto the shallower rocks but would have no luck due to the strong current. After only seconds of struggling against the water, Amyea could no longer hold her breath and she almost fell asleep. seconds later she felt herself being lifted from the water, then coming to see the face of her distressed father. Afterwards she did not fear water, but would not go deep enough into any as to force herself to swim. She once tried to swim in a lake a few days after she almost drowned, but she did not fair well. She got in deep about two feet and then struggled to stay above water, she was again rescued by her father. When she was six months old her family and pack died in a forest fire, making her a loner. After the forest fire than killed her family, she had no choice but to wander alone. When she was 8 months old she ran into another wolf. When she met the wolf it growled at her, and her first instinct was to run, but she didn't move even slightly. She growled back at the wolf, but soon found she had made the wrong decision when it went after her. She ran through the forest, and thanks to her speed got away safely. When she was 10 months she again had a bad experience with a fire. When she was wandering through a forest on her way to hunt, she found herself face to face with a wild fire. Trees and grass where completely engulfed in flames. She stood still scared and shaking. She knew she needed to run, but she didn't move. The flames where now all around her, she then forced herself to move and ran through a very small gap in the fire. She now journey's far and wide searching for something to change her, and what she is. Other: none.
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Amyea
Jul 12, 2012 16:22:07 GMT -5
Post by Artemis on Jul 12, 2012 16:22:07 GMT -5
Looks great so far; do a quick spell/grammar check over, you have a few awkward sentences but nothing too bad. ^^
The only thing I ask is that you expand her history to meet our requirements. c: Talk about her near-drowning, how it happened, etc.
Then you just need to change your display name to fit your character as well. ^^
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Amyea
Loner
[M:50][A:11]
Live To Be Free. Wolvles Forever
Posts: 3
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Amyea
Jul 12, 2012 18:52:36 GMT -5
Post by Amyea on Jul 12, 2012 18:52:36 GMT -5
I Modified it and hopefully fixed what need to be fixed. c: but i'm still not sure if it's okay yet.. xD Am i good to go? Or is there still something i need fixed. I just want to be sure before i join a pack or do anything. :3
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Amyea
Jul 14, 2012 17:57:59 GMT -5
Post by Artemis on Jul 14, 2012 17:57:59 GMT -5
Good now, sorry for the wait! +50pp.
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