Sunchaser
Children of Hvítur Ári
Guardian[M:-480][A:2]
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Post by Sunchaser on Jul 11, 2010 16:49:57 GMT -5
General Name: Sunchaser Alias: Sun, Sunny Species: Keiyou Gender: Female Age: 6 Pack: n/a Rank: Loner
Physical Height: 42 Weight: 60 pounds Appearance: Sunchaser is a light wolf. She moves on your toes as if she where a dancer, flitting through the lands with her red colored coat. She has the coat of a red wolf even though she is not. Her eyes however are a bright blue that darkens and lightens with her mood. Her fur is longer then most but not so long as to trip her up. Her wings are the colors of a redwinged hawk. The barring on the wings are small mostly non existent.(basiicly more red and brown over black). The underside of the wing is pure brown, with redish tints throughout and white tips just on the underside.
She is a beautiful wolf, covered in the sleek muscles needed to fly. However underneath the fur are scars. She is covered in them around her rump as well as her legs. The scars are battle scars though some are from her past. Other: nothing i can think off >.>
Mental Strengths: Sunchaseer is fast when she is in the air, she is also nimble. She loves using hte sun to hide in, knowing where it is at all times when she is fighting. Weaknesses: when she is on the ground and doing more then walking she stumbles a lot. She also has a fear sometimes of certian male species, having been attacked by a male Lyxxus when she was young. Personality: Sunchaser is strong and doent take much crap. However when it comes to cubs she loves them and likes to play around with them. Even though she is still young she wants to have lots of pups for when she is older she can just sit and watch a pack out of her offspring.
Sunchaser is looking for romance however she will hide her true emotions about how she feels about someone till she is certian that the other likes her as well. She is shy around males, unless they are trying to put her down and make her listen to them. She truthfullly hates those that think they are better then her. Not that there arent those that are just she doesnt want them thinking they are.
Only time she is truly relaxed is if she finds her mate as well as when she is around pups or any time of baby animal. When she hunts she follows creatures back to their dens to see if they are mothers or fathers of babies. If so she wont eat them and would starve. History: Sunchaser grew up rather quietly, fighting when needed, flying all the time until she turned 3. Then a rouge lyxxus male came after her and did things to her, causing the scars on her rump. Since then she has trained hard to be faster and stronger when she is in flight. She has learned well and now will take down those who strive to hurt her or those she cares for. Hopefullly this new place will let her have the puppies she wants with the mate she needs. Other: HI :-p
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Post by ARTEMIS! on Jul 11, 2010 17:13:15 GMT -5
Looks good so far! Only a few things I need to point out. :] Firstly, with her appearance... I'm not sure how much the firey red colour would work. Since keiyou have natural colours mostly, a fire red seems a little vibrant.
Secondly, could you expand her personality a bit more? Tell us how she acts around everyone; does she like authority? What about romance?
Besides that it looks good. :] If you have any questions feel free to PM me.
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Post by ARTEMIS! on Jul 11, 2010 17:42:45 GMT -5
As discussed in the cbox, make sure you spell check your work. Looks good now. :] +50
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