Jackle
Styrrstdar Cadre
Subordinate[M:-30][A:3]
~A~l~i~c~e~
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Jackle~
May 25, 2011 14:38:31 GMT -5
Post by Jackle on May 25, 2011 14:38:31 GMT -5
General
Name: Jackle
Alias: Jack, Jacky (hardly ever dose he go by these)
Species: Lupus
Gender: Male
Age: Six years
Pack: Styrrstdar Cadre
Rank: Subordinate
Physical
Height: 40 Inches Weight: 73 Pounds (and 8 ounces xD)
Appearance: Jackle has almost black looking, dark brown, redish fur. His slightly old age has also made some little white fur appear on his chin and between the pads on the bottom of his feet. His fur, though not too aggressive looking, stands up on ends as if angered-ish or scared. Jackle has very thick fur resorting him to either stick to shadowed areas in the day or at least when it gets to the hottest point in the day, if not, sleep in a cold, cold, cold place. On the left side of his body, there is a dark purple splash that is as random as if someone had splashed a bucket of water on him. He has a warming young voice that is inviting, though when in his madness, his voice is cracked and older sounding. He can go between the two voices. He holds himself up like a royal gentleman and tanks longish strides. He also looks upon people with lightish greenish dark purple eyes, reflecting his elemental control, poison.
Other: Jackle's elemental power is poison. But the poison he works on is basically limited to hallucinating poison but it only lasts about a half an hour. Sometimes more, sometimes less, depends if your already healthy or not. He also sometimes drools poison,
Mental Strengths:When battling, he gets a kind of super surge of energy/adrenalin that helps him fight stronger. Not extremely tough, just a bit more than the average wolf since he is already weakish to begin with. This also only comes when his madness clouds him and kind of takes over. He can also talk to his madness... its kind of like having another person in your head... except its really your own thoughts... just a bit madder. -He is very fast, quick and light on his feet. - Jackle can withstand pain a bit more than most male wolves could. -Jackle also has extremely keen eye sight, making up for his slight lack of smell.
Weaknesses: -His madness. When in battle his madness shows, and in hunting, when hes alone, and sometimes bits and pieces can be seen in everyday things he dose. Especially when he has conversations with himself... and arguments. His madness also has the ability to take over him when he is in fear or fighting and such that requires strength. -He also is not quite a good tracker, thus, not much of a hunter. His nose senses less then an average wolf but much more than a human's nose. (yes, I know there is no humans in this world of wolves) -He also has a tender spot for women. Even when he is in his crazy moment or fighting maddeningly, if there were to be a female in danger or a male suddenly being rude to the lady, he would go right after the male harassing the female. -Jackle is also, actually, scared of water, for he cannot swim. When knee high in water, that it about his limit of water.
Personality: Even though Jackle is a mad wolf, he is also quite the gentleman. He wouldn't hurt a female if his life depended on it. Though, he could attack a male without a second thought... or even a first thought! He dose not hide his emotion to a male but to a female, he would only show her that he feels happiness and will show kindness to her. He would take a beating or even death to save one female wolfs life. Someones first impression might be... 'he is odd', 'gentleman at heart', or.. 'he's got that crazy look in his eyes'. He is and looks like all of these. Those who know him or allow themselves to get to know them can easily find what it is like to be a madman, but a truly misunderstood at heart, though possibly not at brain.
History: Jackle was born into a pack full of Lupus wolves, all of the same element control as he, poison. though, they were of all different kinds of poisons. Some pack members poisons were sleeping poison, stunning poison, or killing poison. Jackle inherited his poison based control ability from his father, while having no ability to control the poison that his mother was able to control, killing poison. His pack mates were good and kind. They also loved his two sisters, Lullaby, she had somehow inherited sleeping poison from her grandmother, and Daze, inheriting her mothers controlling poison. Jackle would have had a brother named Hide but somehow he was born dead. Jackle was taught from the time he could open his eyes to be a gentleman. It was always 'sit up strait, bow to the lady dear, be polite, keep your muzzle clean' though he never did really fulfill that last one. Especially when it came to food. Jackle was curious on how he could control his power. Now at this time he was only two years old. He had never been allowed to try out his power, his parents had warned him and this was his first time, hiding behind his parents backs. It backfired. Though finely his parents did starting to teach him little by little to control hallucinating poison, it would work, but little and little when into his blood stream every time. Making him more mad by the day. But only when he used it. When he turned three he left his pack in search for something to complete his life and someone who will not think he was not crazy at one point. His parents never found out what he had done to himself...
Other: Jackle is not misspelled. That is how his parents would spell it. ^ ^
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Jackle~
May 26, 2011 19:32:26 GMT -5
Post by ARTEMIS! on May 26, 2011 19:32:26 GMT -5
The only problem I have is the poison ability and the strength intensifying. Don't change it until I get other staff to check over it. I just want to make sure it's okay before accepting.
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Dreamith
Loner
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Jackle~
May 26, 2011 19:57:01 GMT -5
Post by Dreamith on May 26, 2011 19:57:01 GMT -5
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Jun 2, 2011 16:57:05 GMT -5
Post by ARTEMIS! on Jun 2, 2011 16:57:05 GMT -5
Still waiting on other staff for the poison thing. For the strength, would you be able to reword it to be more like he gets a huge surge of adrenaline which makes up for the intensified strength?
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Jackle
Styrrstdar Cadre
Subordinate[M:-30][A:3]
~A~l~i~c~e~
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Jackle~
Jun 2, 2011 17:42:49 GMT -5
Post by Jackle on Jun 2, 2011 17:42:49 GMT -5
Yep! Made that change. ^ ^
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Post by Cy on Jun 3, 2011 9:44:27 GMT -5
He needs at least one more strength and one more weakness. Boil it down and you only have one for each, I prefer three for each, but since you have so much detail I'll settle for two of each with lots of detail.
Poison is an acceptable element as long as it is well controlled and within reason.
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