Raynor, a Cael

[raynor]

General
Name: Raynor
Alias: Ray
Species: Cael
Gender: Male
Age: 6 years old
Pack: Loner
Rank: n/a

Physical
Height: 40 inches
Weight: 200 pounds
Appearance: Raynor has a deep, low voice, that can either be heard singing, defending himself or someone else or laughing at a joke. This somber voice matches his appearance as large and commanding. Raynor has a black pelt, with gold flecks scattered through it, and it is quite short, but longer than most Caels. His eyes are pure gold, just like his tail. In fact, his tail is the most interesting thing about Raynor: It's very large, larger than most Cael wolves, and is completely gold, with two flippers and large shimmering scales. Since the rest of his body is black, he can hide very well on land and pretty well in the water, as long as his tail is hidden.
Other: One of the biggest of his species, or at least very big.

Mental
Strengths: Raynor is superb when it comes to battle, and is quite intelligent also. When in the water, he is extremely fast, since he uses his large tail to propel him in the water, allowing him to strike out at an opponent with a deadly blow and allowing him the chance to escape if he wants to. On land, he has no trouble walking or running, since he has trained himself to be versatile. He has a great deal of strength and muscle, which gives him an advantage in that area.
Weaknesses: Raynor "jumps the gun" a lot, and sometimes battles over something that could be dealt with more diplomacy. Because of his large muscle mass, he is not very agile on land, and only a little in the water. He cannot stay on land for more than a couple days at a time without feeling the need to swim again, so he always stays near rivers or a lake.
Personality: He's charming, but can turn deadly serious when he needs to. He is strong in spirit and of body, loyal and very dependable, like a rock. He will always be there for someone he cares for. Raynor does turn aggressive very easily, and enjoys to fight once and a while for the fun of it. However, he has a very strong sense of right and wrong, and will recognize fairly quickly when he is wrong. He's a bit of a sherrif, and defends other wolves. However, he is also extremely stubborn and dominating sometimes, that other wolves find him irritating. He is impatient, and strong-willed, and enjoys joking around, but knows when enough is enough.
History: Raynor was born to a Caella and a Cael, who happened to be the chief of defense and fighting of his pack. His father taught him all he knew, and Raynor was happy living with his pack, working as a soldier, until he turned three. Young, stubborn and determined, he wanted to leave his pack to start out on his own. His father disagreed, which caused a family feud between the two. His father was a soldier, used to following orders, but his son was the complete opposite: He didn't listen to anyone, and did not consider himself less or more than the alphas. Soon, the alphas of the pack and his father decided to bann him, for his inability to follow orders from his superiors. Raynor left angry at his family and his entire pack, and he vowed never to be treated as an inferior to someone else ever again.
Other: Raynor in still searching for that elusive equality and freedom, and yearns for a family of his own. However, until he finds someone he truly loves, Raynor will be alone.

[Artemis]

Hey there. Looks good. There's just one tiny thing.

It seems your bio has a few really weird and random characters mixed in, like a ļ. I'm gonna guess they happened when you copy/pasted your bio from a word program. ^^;; If you could just remove all those, you'll be all set!

[raynor]

Thanks Nali! I think I fixed the weird symbol problem, I'm glad you pointed that out, I had no idea they were there. Have a nice day, Kas

[Artemis]

Accepted!
+50pp