Lawson, a Yagi

[lawson]

General
Name: Lawson
Alias: n/a
Species: Yagi
Gender: Male
Age: 5 years
Pack: Loner
Rank: n/a

Physical
Height: 46 inches
Weight: 225 pounds
Appearance:Lawson has a dark chestnut fur with varying highlights of a lighter brown. His piercing eyes are a bright orange, and he is well muscled. His horns are long, medium-thick, and very sharp, like an anteloppe’s.They are also black, with no other markings. He has two saber teeth that stick out slightly even when his mouth is closed, which isn’t often. His tail is bobbed, like most Yagi.He has no markings or any other distinct features except for a long scar over his right eye. He could be considered fairly normal looking if not for his odd eyes and scar.
Other: Loves to talk to himself.

Mental
Strengths: This Yagi is very strong, and loves to use his large, sharp horns to stab enemies. He is an excellent liar, and has a very creative imagination. He is intelligent, and puts on a good “poker face”. He can also use his large fangs to bite opponents.
Weaknesses: Lawson is a lying lunatic. He talks to himself, hears a constant voice in his head, and lies every time he speaks, making it impossible for other wolves to trust him. As such, he cannot make allies easily. His scar sometimes gives aways his inner evilness, if his skillful lying cannot save him. He lies so much, he’s begun to forget who he really is.
Personality: Lawson loves to lie and deceive other wolves. He does enjoy fighting physically, but takes the greatest amount of pleasure by lying and hurting other wolves emotionally. He enjoys mind games of all sorts, and it is hard to accuse him of anything since no one’s ever quite sure what he did, just that he did something.He is also very vain, and has absolutely no loyalty to anyone but himself. He believes himself smarter than other wolves, and has a cruel perception that if they do fall prey to his lies that they truly deserved to be hurt or accused of something they didn’t do. Lawson only ever does something to benefit himself, and rarely says his real name.
History: Lawson was raised in an all Yagi pack, who believed in honor and dignity above all else. Until the age of two, Lawson was quite normal. Then one day, his brother and him were playing in the forest. His older brother warned him not to stray, but Lawson didn’t listen, and got lost. His pack searched for him for days, but he was never found. However, Lawson did not know this, and believed his pack had set him up to get lost, to abandon him. The young wolf learned to live in constant solitude, inventing up various scenarios, fending for himself and talking to a voice inside his head, the only other living thing that could talk to him. Finally, after a year in the wild, he found his way back to his old pack lands. He watched them for several days and nights, noting how well and happy they were without him. Jealousy and rage consumed him when he saw his older brother with the female Yagi he had loved, and for several nights, he picked off some members of the pack while they slept: The first night his brother, the next his father, the next his mother and finally his brother's lover. Quietly and with a great deal of care, he managed to kill them all in their sleep by stabbing them in the throat. Consumed by rage, the Yagi lost all sense of rational thought at that moment, determined to make the wolves whom he thought had destroyed his life pay. The scar he has was from his brother, who had woken up and tried to fight Lawson, but failed. Lawson quickly left his old pack lands, since after his last nocturnal kill the pack was beginning to suspect who the mysterious killer was and had set up guards. From then on, Lawson vowed to make any lives of the wolves he met as miserable and empty as his own. His scar is forever a memory of what he lost, and he still believes that his own pack betrayed him, even if they did try and find him that fateful day.
Other: Lawson has been living on his own for three years.

[NOCHT !]

Just a few spelling/grammar errors;
"This Yagi is very strong, and loves to use his large, sharp horns to stab ennemies. He is an excellent lier, and has a very creative imagination."
Give your bio a quick spell/grammar check and a read over to eliminate those.

As well, even a strong yagi wouldn't be able to take out a bunch of yagi on his own. Perhaps you could work it into his history that he picked each one off one by one when they straggled from the pack or something?

Please read over our Character Guide. Yagi cannot live without parents until they are 1.5 years of age, so you'll need to change that a tad.

[kasmira]

Thanks a bunch Nocht, I'm a little unfamiliar with Yagi, mostly used to Lupuses's. I'll fix that up. However, I checked the online dictionary and that's how lier is spelt, or at least I think. I could be wrong, but the spell check didn't pick it up either.

Thanks again and have a nice day, Kas

[Artemis]

Liar = someone who tells lies.

Lier = someone who is lying down.

xD

[elwyne]

I feel stupid... I had a total memory lapse.... Thanks Nali, I'll fix that soon.

Kas

[Artemis]

Accepted!