Sumomo ~Lumen~

[Sumomo]

OOC Information
OOC Name:Sumomo
Link to Previous Character:none

General
Name: Sumomo
Alias: Momo, Momi
Species:Lumen
Gender: Female
Age: 1 Year
Pack: Loner
Rank: n/a

Physical
Height: 48"
Weight: 40lbs
Appearance: Adult: A light rose petal pink covers most of this young females beautiful lithe form, her entrancing orbs are of the most beautiful Garnet hue, as if the blood of her father itself had graced these precious orbs. Her front and hind legs are colored a deep garnet matching her eyes, all the way up to her hips and shoulders. A deep moonlit silver graces her back, shoulders, and rose petal hued banner in the form of wide deep stripes causing a strikingly fierce appearance, as well as a beautiful moonlit silver diamond on her forehead resting between her Garnet gems, that actually belies her sweet and friendly demeanor. Her rather small stature makes her rather shy when approaching others but makes her much more attractive in some males eyes, though she does not see it in herself she is quite beautiful.

Other: Voice sample: www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bz1508RBx2w

Mental
Strengths:Beauty,Kindness,Sweetness, Agility,
Weaknesses:Size, Thin bones,Kindness, Her youth
Personality:
Her looks make her a little hard to approach due to the fact that she often has her ears laid back. But often she is very friendly and sweet, she has no issues though with making her opinion known, as she grew she kept quite a bit of her puppy personality, which makes her fun loving and playful. She would much rather be playing and making friends than leading a pack or fighting. Though due to her losing her parents and family early on in life she has a bit of an issue when shes smoke or anything remotely close to fire she shies away and runs in the other direction.

She also has a tendency to get rather violent when cornered when she smells smoke or even sees it. She often seeks comfort in the wolf that adopted her as a child. She is quiet often searching for any signs that her parents or brother survived the fire that separated them so long ago due to growing up as the adopted daughter of Vladimir she grew to be quiet self reliant, she has no problems defending herself or her family or pack.he has some trust issues having watched her real father disappear, caused her to not trust others very quickly. She is afraid that she will be left alone yet again, making it harder for her to find herself in a pack. The last pack she was in was her adoptive father Vladamir's pack. She ended up watching Vladamir die right in front of her, this in turn caused her deep scars. She fears getting close to others as it is a possibility of her watching them die. Her twin brother also caused her deep emotional scars with his mental and physical abuse at their young age.


History: Sumomo grew up like any normal pup from birth till she was three months old, she grew up with her mother and father both kind and loving parents she also grew up with a twin brother, he was rather angry all the time he was very prone to biting her and tormenting her when her parents weren't around.She often told her mother about it but she often turned her head and laughed as to her mother her brother could do no wrong. This pushed her closer to her father who comforted her when her mother rejected her. At 5 months old her mother rejected her because she thought Sumomo was often lying about her brothers overly vicious behavior. Soon after her father took her from her mother and brother out to hunt rabbits and he left her under a large redwood tree, and went off on his own to hunt for the four of them, that's when she first saw the smoke coming from the direction of their den. She instinctively knew to run and run fast. Sumomo quickly listened to her instincts and took off at a full all out run and headed for the edge of the forest. Since then Sumomo has been wandering alone searching for someone to take her in and give her a family, she also searches for her lost family.

Much time has passed though she has never forgotten her parents or the cruelty her twin brother so often dealt her. As she grew up being raised by the old Russian she had started to call father. She now searches for a place to call home and mate to settle down with.

[NOCHT !]

Do a quick grammar/spell check. Few awkward sentences; 'quiet beautiful' instead of quite [also seen later, just do a quick once over], 'lain' instead of laid.

Besides that try to expand her personality a bit, dig a bit deeper. It is hard because of her age, but do your best. Another thing, regarding her age, she's still too young to survive on her own, which leaves you with a few options.

1. Make her at least 2
2. Have another wolf "adopt her"
3. Have her join a pack straight off

Let me know when you've edited it through by posting here and what you plan to do regarding the age thing. ^^

[Sumomo]

Trying to find someone to adopt her but if that don't work out what pack would be best?

[Sumomo]

It has been settled. Dev'on is adopting Sumomo as his daughter.

[Moonrose]

It looks like you've met Arty's requirements, so I'll accept you here. ^^ Welcome to Wonderwhy and remember the 200 word requirement for posts.