Starrunner **Finished**

[starrunner]

OOC Information
OOC Name: starrunner
Link to Previous Character: n/a

General
Name: Starrunner
Alias: Stan
Species: Keiyou
Gender: Male
Age: 5 years
Pack: Centena Accord
Rank: Page

Physical
Height: 43 inches
Weight: 53 pounds
Appearance: Starrunner has dark blue eyes like the sky looks just after sunset. He has brown fur that gets darker as you get nearer to his tail and also gets darker where the legs meet the paws. His ears and the tip of his tail are as dark as a starless night. Oddly his wings and paws could almost be considered white, but they are actually a light shade of tan. Starrunner is good at flying long distances because he conserves energy by riding on the thermals that rise from the ground. When he walks on the ground he stumbles so he prefers to fly many places. He is a very tall wolf but also very thin; this is because he doesn't eat much.
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Mental
Strengths: Starrunner is strong due to his long hours in the air. He has also taught himself how to snatch prey off the ground, such as a Hawk does. He is loyal and friendly to wolves who do the same to him. If a friend is in danger he will join them in their defense.
Weaknesses: Starrunner is not a good fisher even though he often kills prey by swooping down out of the sky, in fact, he hates swimming. He does not like wolves who are mean-spirited, and hurt others for fun. This is because he had trouble with bullies in the months that he was still with his parents. If somebody lies to him his temper flares like an erupting volcano and there will probably be violence. If there is a fight between other wolves he doesn't like to get involved because he is afraid the whole thing will be blamed on him. Starrunner usually doesn't stay anywhere for a long time, particularly when he is near a pack. When he leaves he doesn't want anybody to notice so he leaves no trace.
Personality: Starrunner is a quiet wolf, but can be funny whenever he wants to. He is friendly toward other wolves unless they start lying to him. When friends start lying to him there will probably be a fight. If violence erupts among the other wolves he tends to avoid it altogether unless a friend of his is in danger. Although he has friends from time to time, he is a wandering wolf and doesn't stay in one area for long periods of time. when he leaves he goes without a trace of him left behind. He does not like fishing or swimming because of his brother's death. Overall, he is a quiet, thoughtful, and reserved wolf.
History: Starrunner was born into a litter of six. For the first year of his life he stayed with his parents just like his five brothers. A year and a half after he was born one of his brothers drowned while trying to teach Starrunner to fish. This is why he hates swimming. Enraged his parents blamed his death on Starrunner and kicked him out of the den. He wandered around for three years scrounging around every day just to get the food he needed until he went back to the den. His parents didn't even remember him. Starrunner was devastated and so he went northeast to the mountains, where he now lives wherever he can find shelter.
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[Somatra]

Hello there and welcome to Wonderwhy!

My name is Somatra and I will gladly look over your bio, but first there a couple things you need to do before I can review it. First, please make sure that the name displayed on your profile is the same as your character's. It currently reads "Starrunner" but your char's name is "Joseph".

Secondly, Wonderwhy has provided a generic code that is for member's use when they create bios, it helps staff to review and keeps things organized and easier to sort. I see you have partially followed it, however please take the following code (click here) and insert your current bio into that form following the guidelines established.

The last thing is that we have a minimum word count on certain areas of the bio profile to ensure that characters in Wonderwhy are developed in a way that encourages members to expand their creativity. You have almost met the 100 word count, however certain areas in your bio fall a bit short, just expand on what you have done already and you will be fine.

Once that is done reply to this thread to let me know and I shall certainly get to the reviewing process.

Thank you,
Somatra

[starrunner]

Thanks for the link. I think Ive got the hang of it now.

[Somatra]

Alright, thank you for meeting the changes and I will give it a look now. Everything seems fine, though I would like to see his weaknesses developed a bit more and incorporated into his personality to add to what you currently have written. And the only other thing I see is the mention that he is evicted from his den at five months, essentially at such a young age he is still learning to hunt, so perhaps just add on a couple months so that survival on his on is more feasible (consult Character Guide found here for more information about the process of aging). Once you have made those changes let me know and I will get him up and running!

Som

[starrunner]

Thank you. I looked at the character guide again and found out he could survive without his parents at eighteen months.
-Starrunner