Bain (Edited) ((Complete))

[Bain]

OOC Information
OOC Name:Emmalie
Link to Previous Character:N/A

General
Name: Bain Inuzuka
Alias: Bain
Species: Yagi
Gender: Female
Age: 5
Pack: Loner
Rank: n/a

Physical
Height: 48 Inches (4 feet)
Weight: 220
Appearance:

Bain's appearance is subtle, but no where near normal. Her pelt is a light brownish shade around her face, and her "mane" is an earthy green. The fur over the bulk of her body, including her tail, is noticeably darker then the hair around her face. Her thick fleece wrappes around her shoulders and down her spine giving her the appearance of having a slight mane. It thickens around the back of her neck and shoulders, for she finds that it is quite difficult for an opponent to get in a very painful hit when all they reach is thick hair that can clot and block the nose and throat. Thus, resulting in some irritation. Even though the pelt is thicker in these areas, it does not appear to be bulkish or overly eccentric. In fact, it is quite subtle. Her talon like claws curve into a nice arch that reaches the ground with slight clicking sounds as she walks. When she raises her hackles, because of all the thick fur, Bain appears to grow quite large with the addition of her hairy pelt.

Bain is of a more muscular build, though not grotesquely so. She still retains a feminine form while being quite dominating in stature. Her muscles are more prominent in her back legs, used for leaping tall heights and running for a long time. Overall, Bain is a force to be reckoned with, especially when this bulldozer of a girl gets mad. Also, her horns are a pure black, like her nails. They wrap around her forehead somewhat to also provide some protection. These horns are great for fighting at night considering they're coloration. Not only that, but these massive weapons are sharpened regularly to a fine, almost gleaming, point. ((As seen in Picture))

Other: N/A

Mental
Strengths:

There are many things that Bain is good at. It mostly includes fighting, and most forms of combat. Bain is also very manipulative, able to take on the many different personalities she has encountered. And she's seen them all. From nonchalant, to a seducer, to an broken down, whimpering pup, and anything in between, if she's seen it, she can do it. Along with that, she is very good at withstanding cold temperatures, even for her own species. Bain is also good at forming mid combat strategies that have help her to come out on top. All in all, Bain is manipulative, resistant, and very adaptive.

Weaknesses:

The one thing that seems to get Bain in the most trouble, is her mouth. See, she can't seem to hold her tongue very well, not matter how hard she tries. Speaking her mind and bending others to her will has always been a great blessing, but a damning curse as well. Not to mention she isn't afraid to get her paws dirty. When it comes to fighting, she's right there on the battle field, front lines. Even though she might not be the fastest creature out there, she makes up for it in brute strength. She may be able to move without making much noise, but this process is slow, and not always the greatest way to get around when time is of the essence. So, should she ever need to get somewhere stealthily and quickly, it most likely would not work out very well.

Mental

Bain suffers from Multiple Personality Disorder. This means, she has two mentally different states battling for control in her head constantly. Her two states have a name each, they are; Bain and Kiya. Their personalities are as follows;

Bain:

Bain is pretty emotionless to say the least. She's always watching, always observing. Of course, who would have time to be outgoing with two personalities, two minds battling for control over you're body? Yes, Bain knows how to protect herself, but she never flaunts it about, only using her skills when needed. Plus, she always has a cold, indifferent stare chiseled in stone on her face. It's not like she has time for privileges like emotions. In short, Bain is, in her entirety, a badass. Cold, uncaring, silent, yes, Bain at first glace is not a wolf to be taken lightly, almost intimidating to most. And the fact that she is huge doesn't really bring other creatures warm, fuzzy feelings about her either.

Kiya:

Psychotic, Evil, Cruel. It's words like this that can even scratch the surface of what the purely sickening creature Kiya is. Crazed further then any other creature could most likely survive, she is the reincarnation of evil itself for those who have seen her, of course, that is the last thing they ever see. Killing any and all in her path with a crazed gleam in her gaze, a cackling, ear piercing roar bubbling in her throat and a snicker prying her face open to reveal needleish teeth Kiya enjoys killing. Even the sickest of rituals she partakes in, something as juvenile as cannibalism is a dainty pleasure for her. Kiya is not something you want to run into, considering you most likely wont survive the encounter.

History:

Bain's past is very... interesting, to say the least. Not to sad, not to happy, not to exciting, but not to dull. Bain can't remember most of her past, not that she wants to from what she can remember. You see, Bain has lost her memory. Though not all of it, it IS enough to drive her crazy with a want and need to know. She has been walking for what seems like forever, jumping from one pack to another, the only connection she has with her past pack is a hate filled brand on her shoulder her loving mother bestowed upon her before she was murdered. Torn to shreds by her own pack. Literally. Her limbs torn from her, her fur ripped off, totally mutilated. That's all that Kiya can remember. So, with a new hatred for anything and everything, including herself, she has set off, eager to find a pack that wont shun her for her evil intent or her wicked ways. Bain's past is stained red with blood, and she doesn't very much care, for she most likely will draw a sea of red in her desperate search for her past, and her revenge.

Since her travels have begun, Bain has managed to piece together some of what happened to her, and her family. Her father was a cruel leader, forcing himself onto Bain's mother, thus giving birth to Bain. But, just because she looked slightly... different (at least in a mental state), her father, enraged, ordered the brutal death of her mother. Because of Bain's "outbursts" her father was convinced that the despicable bitch has birthed him a demon child, which he viewed as a bad omen. Mad at his "family" he ordered the death of both Bain and her mother, though, her mother gave everything she could to keep Bain safe for a few months. But, finally, the pack caught up to her. Then Bain, who was well hidden, could do nothing but watch as her mother was murdered...

Other: N/A

[Ethereal]

Yagi do not have blue fur or blue eyes. Unless you purchase unnatural colors you're going to need to change her appearance. Also can you clarify the details of the "lion like mane"? I find it highly unlikely for a wolf to have a thick mane. Unless you make it less drastic that will also have to go.

[Bain]

Done and done.

[Ethereal]

Everything looks good, except Yagi usually have docked tails. If you want Bain to keep her long tail you should mention it somewhere in her history Also even if your character doesn't remember her past, you should still write about what happened to her. Right now it's a bit too vague as is, so I'd appreciate it if you'd flesh that out.

[Bain]

Alright, thank you. I fixed the history up a bit (added a whole other paragraph) so hopefully that sheds some light on both issues. Now, I'm off to post!

[Ethereal]

All yagi are born with full tails, but they're docked by the parents.

[Bain]

Alright, I fixed it up some. Sorry this is taking you so long. )= But, I think everything is good now. ^-^

[Ethereal]

Thank you for fixing everything so quickly. Welcome to WonderWhy