°Vindict°
Centena Accord
Heir[M:0][A:3]
?CROW?
Posts: 13
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Post by °Vindict° on May 11, 2012 16:20:02 GMT -5
OOC Information OOC Name:Crow/winkatuck Link to Previous Character: Kirai Rausting
General Name:Vindict Alias: Vince, Vincent, V man (only close friends...) Species: Lupus Gender: Male Age: Newborn Pack: Centena Accord Rank: heir
Physical Height: 45 in. (Adult) Weight: 177 lbs (Adult) Appearance: Vindict hold his body straight and proper, even as a young pup he found that you always had to hold yourself like your rank, and since he is a possible heir of the pack, he has to look presentable. This little pup moves with graceful and nimble steps, his muscles growing just as fast as his eyes are turning from puppy blue to a dormant and powerful red. His body is strong and sturdy all the way up to his tailbone. His pelt consist of contradicting colors of a light blue with a darker shade slapped on top of it. Vindict's paws are painted a simple hay color as are the four swirls on the sides of his shoulders and hindlegs. To finish his regal look, he also has the same yellow tipped on the ends of each of his ears and rimming the top of each of his eyes. Other: Fire Lupus
Mental Strengths: - Born Leader
- Calm
- Action Based
- Pride
- Quick Thinker
Weaknesses: - Aloof
- Shy
- Reserved
- Critical
- Compliant
Personality: Vindict is a very aloof wolf. He doesn't find much pleasure or joy in many things and tends to stray away from other wolves because he feels they are simply not worth his time or are taking away from his own. He is very distant and tends to daydream a lot. Vince also tends to come off very quiet and shy but will put his two cents in when he knows the subject. Overall he would rather just sit on the sidelines and observe all the other wolves, throwing a blunt comment in every now and then when he feels necessary. Calm, collected, and quiet... this wolf is more of action than of words.
He is a born leader that doesn't like the lime light, and would rather not put his nose where he feels it does not belong. Overall Vince is well tempered and can put up with a lot before it bugs him and he would rather only lead if no one else is up for the task. Thus he can come off more egotistic when you get to know him better and once you realize just how in control of himself he is, it is easier to trust and believe him.
History: Born into Centena Accord as a possible heir of queen Keinvarii and king Acelan. He has three other siblings, two older sisters and one younger brother. I expect he will have a lot of pressure on him in the future as he grows, as will his other siblings, to who will stand up and lead of the pack.
Other: Will add onto history as he grows...
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Post by soar on Jul 9, 2012 17:29:45 GMT -5
Yay, the third heir <3
The bio looks good so far, but there's something that confuses me. You mentioned that he's aloof and then you described him as trusting. They contradict each other so can you clear this up please c:
Also in Vindict's history you mentioned that other wolves of the Centena Accord believe that he should be the next ruler. I don't think this is appropriate to say this as it could be considered as power-playing (you controlling what others might think about your wolf). So please can you edit this part.
Fix these small things and you're good to go c:
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Post by °Nepara° on Jul 20, 2012 14:01:28 GMT -5
Oh mmkay soarly, sorry i only said the thing about being alpha since he's the oldest male and I just thought thats how it goes xD I will fix this later, I'm lazy
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°Vindict°
Centena Accord
Heir[M:0][A:3]
?CROW?
Posts: 13
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Post by °Vindict° on Jul 20, 2012 16:08:50 GMT -5
okay i think he is good to go.
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Aveza
Centena Accord
Heir[M:0][A:3]
soar !
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Post by Aveza on Jul 20, 2012 16:14:41 GMT -5
Thanks for making the necessary changes! Accepted! <33
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