Zodiac

[Zodiac]

OOC Information
OOC Name: Moose
Link to Previous Character: None~

General
Name: Zodiac Chandra
Alias: Zoe
Species: Lyxxus
Gender: Female
Age: 2 years
Pack: Loner
Rank: n/a

Physical
Height: 23 inches
Weight: 30 pounds
Appearance: Zodiac is rather on the slim side. Although she is of larger size for her species, she is definitely a bit too scrawny. Her ribs are slightly visible through her medium-lenth, yellow-orange fur, and her legs are rather long and slender, but it does not affect her in many ways. She moves with light grace, and careful steps, you will never see her being clumsy intentionally. her eyes are a pale gold, which darken to orange at the rims. Unfortunately, scars are carefully engraved in her left front limb, in the form of five horizontal lines on her lower leg.
Other: nope.

Mental
Strengths: Very Agile, Speedy, Good Eyesight, Intelligent, Stealthy
Weaknesses: Battle, Ambush, Swimming, Small spaces, Co-operation, Prideful
Personality: Zodiac is not very good at listening. She prefers to go by her own orders, and she can usually think up quite a few different ways to do things in a short space of time. She does however; hate water, and is a terrible swimmer, and avoids water as much as she can. She doesn't like close-combat, preferring wide spaces to fight, and hates small, confined spaces, although she tends to avoid areas that she could be ambushed. Zodiac is very capable of being stealthy, and walks quietly from simple habit, but is quick to flee if a fight starts up.

History: She was born to average parents - Elouie and Adin, along with two siblings, Khen and March. Her puppy-hood was normal too, apart from the fact that the small family tended to wander as soon as the pups were strong enough. But, as Zodiac reached one year, she began to suspect something wrong with Khen. It turned out he had fallen in love, and so Zodiac kept her nose out of his business. But then he started to act weird - meaner, harsher towards his family. March and her tried to help, but he wouldn't tell them what happened. Finally, Khen got angered, and attacked Zodiac, who managed to fight him off, but gaining the parallel scars upon her left front leg, and others, now hidden under her sandy fur. Elouie and Adin chased Khen out, and when they did, the family found out what had been tormenting the young wolf. His crush had broken his heart, and left him to die. Zodiac immediately tried to reason with her parents, only to be turned on again. She escaped with March, and the two lived together for a few years, then parted ways, wondering what life could bring them.
Other: nope.

[Moonrose]

Welcome to WonderWhy! I'm Moon and I'll be critiquing your bio today.

First things first, I won't go too much into detail right now because I'm going to have to render this bio incomplete. You're short on all your word counts, so make sure you pay attention to those and reach those for me! Post back here when you're done and I'll give it another look. :3