Aerodyspyle
Hellion Mafia
Soldier[M:50][A:14] [SG:0]
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Post by Aerodyspyle on Oct 2, 2012 21:03:56 GMT -5
OOC Information OOC Name: ShootingStar Link to Previous Character: This is my first charrie General Name: Aerodyspyle Alias: Aero,or Spy Species: Eremus Gender: Male Age: 5 Pack: Loner Rank: n/a
Physical Height: 30 inches Weight: 25 pounds Appearance: Aerodyspyle lightly and gracefully moves about,favoring his left front leg for no reason at all.His camel-like hooves are slightly chipped and are a dusty,sandy brown color,because of all his moving around.He thrives in the heat,and can go without water for days.His tail is always moving from the dominance position to the submission position to the lax position.He communicates mostly with his eyes,and rarely talks.His legs are long and slender,but muscular and strong.His carries his head in a low snakelike position,much like a fox.His thin,dull coat is a muddy tan,light brown,with tinges of gray and white.His eyes are a bright golden colors,in the night twinkling like a star.His big eyes enable him to see easily in the darkness of night.Despite his size,he is actually quite strong.He hunts easily without a pack.He can hear easily because of the largeness of his ears.He is toothpick skinny,all his ribs show prominently.He'll get fatter once he finds hot wheather. Other: He has a scar over his right eye,and a scar on his bottom lip. Mental Strengths: He is friendly,quiet,sly,kind,and fun. Weaknesses: Gruff,offending,quiet,timid,wild/crazy. Personality:Aerodyspyle is friendly and he says hi to everyone,but once he's in a conversation,he says exactly what's on his mind,making him sound gruff,heartless,and offensive.He is mocked for his low,raspy voice,since people think he is being a childish actor,making his voice sound raspy in an act of play to get attention.He is sly and cunning,and many believe his dirty tricks are unfair,but really he only outsmarts a person.Some people feel sorry for him since he naturally looks very skinny,so Aerodyspyle takes advantage of that.He will rob you blind.But if he trusts you,he will protect you with his life.He is very very timid and supremely avoids the contact of other wolves.He loves to tease people he likes and is a good joker.The twinkle in his eyes would make anyone smile.It takes a long time for him to trust someone,but when he does,they're as thick as theives.He tries hard to make people happy,though most of the time without any success. History: Aerodyspyle was born into a strange family, raised by a elderly wolf, who found the pups in her den while coming back from a hunt. Aerodyspyle, found himself learning to love the old hag, while all his siblings babbled on about how terrible she was, which nearly mad ehis angry that they could be so mean to the lady who raised them. Since his siblings didn’t like the old lady, they left the first possible chance they had, teaching themselves how to hunt, fish and find shelter, which made the elder, very upset, so Aredoyspyle stayed with her, and she began to raise him like her own. Teaching him secret skills that her parents and friends had taught her over the years, and sometimes, during his lessons, the brute found himself wondering about his siblings and his parents, where they went, if they had families, and what they were doing, if they were still alive that was. Every day, Aerodyspyle would venture out of the den, the distance growing and growing, until one week, he didn’t come back for three days, and when he came back, he found his “mom”, nearly dead, laying on the cold, hard den ground. To him she whispered “I love you son, don’t ever forget, I will be watching you.” She spat out a cough of blood onto the floor, then let out her last breathe before dying. Other:
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Post by Somatra on Oct 3, 2012 14:52:13 GMT -5
Hello ShootingStar and a warm welcome to Wonderwhy! My name is Somatra and I will be gladly reviewing your bio, so if you have any questions you can always feel free to pm me anytime. Alright, so as far as I can tell there aren't any major changes to be done, just one minor thing to be spruced up: (a) Please list your Weaknesses and Strengths in bullet format and ensure that you have a minimum of five for each. Currently you have 4 of each and our requirement is five.
And that's all, so when you have that changed just reply to this thread so that I might get you up and running! Thanks for joining Wonderwhy and kind regards, Somatra
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Aerodyspyle
Hellion Mafia
Soldier[M:50][A:14] [SG:0]
Nom nom nom nom nom
Posts: 8
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Post by Aerodyspyle on Oct 3, 2012 20:29:38 GMT -5
okay i fixed that
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Post by Somatra on Oct 3, 2012 21:12:52 GMT -5
Ok, looks good, free to roam wherever your muse may take you! Would love to thread with you, I have an open thread here (if you are interested): Illicit Temptations .
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